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Parker McCoy's avatar

Wow. I felt like it was all making sense and that in this crazy situation, the point-of-view character sees nothing strange about this, like burying yourself with a relative is normal. Hehe. Very interesting tale, Grave Worm.

Lani Nieu's avatar

You made my spine shoot bolts of pins and needles.

I love it.

Grave Worm's avatar

Honestly, I do that to myself a lot.

Some people say writing is therapeutic, but I develop new traumas when I write something like this. lol

Thank you for reading it.

Lani Nieu's avatar

I'm gonna have to read more of your work.

The "woe is me" and "she wanted to be ravaged by him" stuff bores me.

Grave Worm's avatar

No, I'm more of a "ruin your day with peer reviewed nihilism" kinda guy. lol

I see you restacked Death Metal for Infants. Thank you. If it's Cognitive Contraband, it's all true. I know I do not provide sources for the rants, but I will not report something unless there are a mountain of legal documents to back it up.

Andrea 🌄's avatar

Definitely got that psychological horror down well! Damn this was captivating! Great work